The Greatest Fumble OAT
It's a great story. The beginning is a little hard but the growth and understanding the two have through their antics is very nice to read. UNFORTUNATELY THE WRITER WANT TO ACTUALLY HAVE A SATISFYING ENDING AND THREW ALMOST EVERYTHING IN THE TRASH ONLY BARELY JUST BARELY GIVING THE ENDING IT WOULD'VE GOTTEN ANYWAYS. literally no point in the conflict towards the end. Like eating a perfect steak but the last bite was slightly burnt n sour but still a good bite.
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