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It's a really good story with lots of potential, but after like half of the story it's speed up and gets shallower. The writing has lots of little plot holes that gets patched up only after some chapters or in the creator notes. Even though I really liked this story and it would be a 10/10 if the pacing slowed down and there were 100chp instead of 50. It's really a bummer that such a good concept got demolished by early ending and x5 pacing 💔💔
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