A lesson in world building and characters
Plot: 4/10; this is by far the weakest point, the sheer amount of narrative bloat in this story actually makes me want to vomit. Its writing is inconsistent with the end of part 3, middle of part, and part 1 being near perfect, the rest of part 2 and 3 were a slow mess. Despite this, if you can get through the that, you can enjoy the great structure, twists, and arcs that the rest offers. Characters: 8/10; I have a problem with the consistency of this story for reasons like this. This story has some of the best, m...
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