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This story is really good and easily connect with readers. Mc is weak, but hardworking. I really hope the fight seen will improve. I think they should have focus on the bonding between mc and his father more to connect their relationship with the readers. That way his father's dead could connect with readers emotion ore deeply and help reasoning with MC's desperation to become stronger. The training part is too short. The world building explanation is rush. But overall the read is amazing and I hope it will get eve...
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