Story seems interesting. Pacing isn’t.
Don’t get me wrong, the art style is fantastic and different from the generic action slop, but skills in making webcomic is more than just drawing pretty pictures. Paneling, composition, dialogue, etc. are all important in the storytelling, sometimes more than how pretty the art looks. Here, the paneling / pacing really detracts from the enjoyment. Usually, pacing should be like breathing: you need highs and lows, big and small, so small moments and gestures can chain into big moments and vice versa. You would kn...
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