Recommended
7/10
Reviewed through Ch. 11 · 95%
17 chapters in, still feels early.
It's good, but a bit slow... It's got excellent worldbuilding but it really feels like the plot is taking a backseat so far. There are many characters but they're not too fleshed out yet apart from mc. Mc's narration and commentary is actually funny, I enjoyed his humor and I liked his character development. The magic part was the highlight for me though, you can tell the author actually put some effort into it, I wish he'd do the same for the names though, he's got no naming sense for real.
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