Not Recommended
5/10
Reviewed through Ch. 176 · 100%
An Excellent Hook, an Average Journey
I was thinking about giving it a generous 6, but after sitting on it for a while, I decided against it. This one is a bit of a shame because it starts out great. It establishes a set of rules and systems, then builds on them in an interesting way. I'd easily rate that opening section an 8 or even a 9. Sadly, a little past the tutorial, it feels like a completely different person took over the writing. It seems to throw away most of those established systems and rules, completely ignoring them which results in a fa...
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