A basic storyline that is âall tell, no showâ makes for a mediocre series
This has a basic premise: an extremely basic plot line, even bellow barebone worldbuilding, a paper-thin MC and even thinner/non-existent side characters (theyâre like props?). The story has neither bone (structure), nor meat (substance), so you just have water. Itâs a sort of progression checklist story with an OP MC, but you donât actually see how the game mechanics function, so when MC throw you stats and say he got better, it is meaninglesss to the readers. In addition, MC keeps claiming one thing but the sto...
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