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For a first time writer (i think) , its pretty decent but you can tell its the writer first time writing a large story such as this. One example is how the ai stuff is introduced haphazardly near the end and all of the possibility of world building that didn't get used such as explaining why didnt the world goes bad after his regression or even show more of him pre regression. The ending was definitely rushed with all the ai stuff as mentioned before. I honestly think another season where they explain and introdu...
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